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Post by Straight Edge on Sept 11, 2013 16:38:59 GMT -5
CYBERTRON12 Mega-cycles into the warStraight Edge stood at his post, flagging Autobots and vehicles past after a quick scan. Someone rolled up, a load of energon being hauled behind him. "Hold still, friend." Straight Edge held up the device used for signature scanning. The device was unresponsive though. "Come on you piece of micro junk!" He slapped it a few times to get it to work. "Hehe, trouble with tech, Guardsman?" The hauler mocked. Finally Straight Edge managed to get it to work and scanned the Autobot. "Your clear, move along." He said professionally, not falling for the bait. Straight Edge sighed. He didn't mind this posting on the border of Autobot territory, the long cycles and jeers were bound to happen. What bothered him was the feeling that this was all the responsibility he could trust himself with nowadays. Suddenly, an explosion ripped through his audio sensors. KA-BOOM!Braaaak
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BraaaakThe alarm blasted. "Decepticons!" The sentry from the tower shouted. Straight Edge brought himself to his feet and drew his weapon, scanning for targets, and ready to engage. totaltransformers.proboards.com/thread/12763/straight-edge
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Thunderwing
RP Character
I HAVE RETURNED!
Posts: 14
RP Faction: DECEPTICON
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Post by Thunderwing on Sept 11, 2013 19:54:22 GMT -5
As the Autobots gathered themselves, they could see that a large squad of Decepticons were headed towards them.
Flying in from the air in groups of seekers and rolling across the ground as battle chargers and tanks. They fired wildly at the Autobots, hoping to keep them off their game as they had just caught them off guard.
As the battle was gaining momentum, though the smoke a lone figure made his way to the fight. However he was not fighting, shooting or making a serious advance of any kind. He simply took his time. As the smoke cleared, at first all you saw were his eyes. And then his smile.
'HEAR ME AUTOBOTS, AND HEAR ME WELL! THUNDERWING HAS RETURNED! AND I AM HERE TO MAKE SCRAP OUT OF ALL OF YOU!"
As the Decepticon leader pressed on, he caught sight of Straight Edge. He pointed at the only Autobot who wasn't running away from the sight of him and said, "AND YOU SHALL BE FIRST TO DIE!"
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Post by Straight Edge on Sept 11, 2013 23:17:03 GMT -5
Straight Edge brought his sword up in a salute.
"I am Straight Edge of the Autobot Elite Guard! Weaponmaster and searvent of Primus, but I will not be joining him today!"
Straight Edge charged to the partially smoke obscured figure, blade out to run him through.
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Thunderwing
RP Character
I HAVE RETURNED!
Posts: 14
RP Faction: DECEPTICON
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Post by Thunderwing on Sept 12, 2013 13:22:09 GMT -5
Thunderwing laughed as the Autobot drew closer. Did this Autobot not know who he was?
As the one known as Straight Edge got closer, Thunderwing leapt out of the way. The Decepticon warloard rolled across the ground and stopped in a crouch. He then drew his battle axe from his back and held it ready. With a devilish smile, Thunderwing rose to his feet, held the axe over his head with both his hands and ran at Straight Edge with a blood curdling laugh.
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Post by Straight Edge on Sept 12, 2013 13:29:52 GMT -5
Thunderwing was more nimble than Straight Edge anticipated.
As the decpticon brought his axe down, laughing as he was about to bury it in Straight Edge's head, the autobot raised his sword in a high guard to divert the momentum of Thunderwing's arc, into the road.
He then sent a back fist at the direction of Thunderwing's faceplate.
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Post by Jazzman Crothers on Sept 12, 2013 21:56:49 GMT -5
OOC: Hi guys, don't mind me but just a few pointers. SE, next time instead of posting that you countered the action, you could post something like this, "the autobot raised his sword in a high guard in order to divert the momentum of Thunderwing's axe into the road. Straight Edge then intended to send a back fist into Thunderwing's faceplate." This way the other player can allow certain actions to succeed. While your post is fair its sometimes better to allow the other player to call what happens to their character. And they have to allow some of your actions to get through or the GM then calls them on it. Plus posting the success of your actions, no matter how harmless they might be, could back fire on you. Post the success of 3 harmless actions on a player and they might not allow any serious damage to befall on their character. Good job though, keep it up. And Thunderwing, your suppose to have a tech spec up for the battle. You should know better.
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Post by Straight Edge on Sept 12, 2013 22:19:05 GMT -5
OOC: Hi guys, don't mind me but just a few pointers. SE, next time instead of posting that you countered the action, you could post something like this, "the autobot raised his sword in a high guard in order to divert the momentum of Thunderwing's axe into the road. Straight Edge then intended to send a back fist into Thunderwing's faceplate." This way the other player can allow certain actions to succeed. While your post is fair its sometimes better to allow the other player to call what happens to their character. And they have to allow some of your actions to get through or the GM then calls them on it. Plus posting the success of your actions, no matter how harmless they might be, could back fire on you. Post the success of 3 harmless actions on a player and they might not allow any serious damage to befall on their character. Good job though, keep it up. And Thunderwing, your suppose to have a tech spec up for the battle. You should know better. ((OOC: I thought I WAS being vague! I didn't mean to imply my action connected, just that I sent the fist in the direction of his face, not that it connected! I'm so sorry!))
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Post by Jazzman Crothers on Sept 12, 2013 23:11:28 GMT -5
OOC: No apologies needed. I understood what you ment when you posted the action of the back handed fist at Thunderwing. I only included it in my rewrite to show you that you could post your character's intended actions, and that the other player could allow those one of those actions or both of them to actually happen. Carry on, your doing an excellent job.
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Thunderwing
RP Character
I HAVE RETURNED!
Posts: 14
RP Faction: DECEPTICON
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Post by Thunderwing on Sept 13, 2013 11:07:38 GMT -5
OOC: Oooooh L7 you haven't changed! But I am sorry, I will get to TW's tech spec and I promise no power gaming.
The back handed fist connected with Thunderwing's face, nailing him on the lower part of his face. Thunderwing took a step back with his hand holding his chin. He turned to look at Straight Edge with a smile as energon leaked from his mouth from a wound Straight Edge's attack had made. "I actually felt that, not bad Autobot? But now, let the real fight begin!"
Thunderwing then swung his axe leveled at Straight Edge's midsection. As he turned with his weapon Thunderwing readied a round house kick that he would aim for the Autobot's torso.
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Post by Straight Edge on Sept 13, 2013 13:34:14 GMT -5
Straight Edge lifted his blade in a cross guard, but the sheer force behind the weapon rendered his defense less than negligible.
"Ah!" He cried in pain. His block stopped the axe from burying into him, but the blade still cut deep.
The power of Thunderwing's arc almost sent Straight Edge to the road, but he steadied himself and was about to counter with a wide cut.
Before his blade connected though, Thunderwing landed a kick right into his injured side.
Straight Edge was sent flying back, the pain from the impact was nothing compared to his battered wound.
The Autobot dug his sword into the road and managed to push himself onto one knee, clutching his side with one hand to stop the leaking.
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Thunderwing
RP Character
I HAVE RETURNED!
Posts: 14
RP Faction: DECEPTICON
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Post by Thunderwing on Sept 13, 2013 14:28:38 GMT -5
Thunderwing laughed as he saw the Autobot struggling to get to his feet. The Decepticon put his axe down and took out his Scrapmaker machine gun. He aimed it at Straight Edge and asked. "Its a pity you Autobots die so easily, any last words before I send you and your over-confident tone to the Void?"(ooc: Tech spec totaltransformers.proboards.com/thread/12778/thunderwing?page=1&scrollTo=115170 )
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Post by Straight Edge on Sept 13, 2013 14:40:20 GMT -5
Straight Edge pushed forward and transformed. Full throttle and forward bumper shield out to absorb oncoming fire.
He drove to ram the Decepticon head on.
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Thunderwing
RP Character
I HAVE RETURNED!
Posts: 14
RP Faction: DECEPTICON
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Post by Thunderwing on Sept 13, 2013 16:52:48 GMT -5
"Interesting...." Thunderwing said to himself, this Autobot surprised him. He activated the chain gun and realized that his weapon had to warm up before it would start shooting. Thunderwing then reached down to grab his axe but it was to late. The Decepticon looked up in shock to see Straight Edge's front bumper ram into his face. Thunderwing went flying through the air as the chain gun finally began to fire away randomly before crashing to the ground and rolling a few feet before coming to a stop.
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Post by Straight Edge on Sept 13, 2013 18:21:25 GMT -5
Straight Edge transformed again and drew his weapon.
"You talk too much."
He then launched himself into the air and tried to drive his sword directly into the Decepticon's spark.
"Arrrrrrrrrgh!" He roared.
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Thunderwing
RP Character
I HAVE RETURNED!
Posts: 14
RP Faction: DECEPTICON
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Post by Thunderwing on Sept 14, 2013 8:11:39 GMT -5
Thunderwing watched as Straight Edge launched himself into the air. He moved to get up and as the Autobot got closer, Thunderwing instinctively raised his chgain gun to defend himself. Straight Edge's sword snapped the chain gun in half and a shower of sparks covered both combatants. Thundering swore and threw his damaged weapon at the Auotbot and made for his battle axe. "You'll pay for that!"
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