*Chocking the controls back the Skyfire stood up, tall and stoped three paces backwards, flustering Marc. Until he saw the sticky note on the cockpit and turned it back-up the right way round with a raised eyebrow, hoping noone had noticed the movements..*.
I'm quite impressed with your first GM endeavour. I mean this is some serious stuff your producing here. I knew you had it in you but your handling it like a experienced pro. Nice and easy, a good pace and now not only is it set up for the next episode, there are some good cliffhangers and some of the threads look as if there going to weave together in the beginning of the next episode.
EDIT: Ok, had to come back and add some more! This first part feels like te origin Robotech show, a quick ending and incredible battles all around. Plus the humour with Scott Cutter and a early death with poor poor Jason.[/glow]
Last Edit: Nov 2, 2004 12:06:23 GMT -5 by skyburner
Thanks, i'm gonna start Episode 2 in a couple of weeks, i wanna give rainy some breathing space too for BW (Like you had after ep 6 of the main rpg, also rainy didn't stop from lthe episode before last to the one just gone.)
Post by TheGreatDestroyer on Nov 3, 2004 9:29:22 GMT -5
Probably a good thing the next chapter won't be starting right away, it will hopefully give me a chance to finish watch Macross 7 and get it out my system otherwise I'd be posting some insane things about going into battle and shooting loudspeaker pods into enemy craft and starting to sing so they can hear my song. Oh and modifying my mech to be controlled by an electric guitar.
On a side note Max from the original Robotech/Macross is captain of their giant spaceship - Captain Max - that's how they address him, they never address him by his last name and Miria is the town Mayor and is refered to as Mayor Miria - awesome stuff.
Hoist: Hmm, I'm guessing nothing to do with Beast Wars or Armada, so either a sequel based in or around the first renegade rp trilogy or War For Cybertron? I'm guessing War For Cybertron!
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